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Review:megthechef43 says:

Interesting concept but it could use a little editing here and there.

This line needs an extra word "I much more potential!" he begged." I sure your fingers were just typing too fast, I do it all the time but it is little things like these that need attention and would make the readability of your chapter so much smoother.

You have really shown the evilness of the Dark Mistress in this chapter. Good Job!

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: Hahah, yes I need to work on my editing. I am doing the entire story on my ipod so sometimes it is quite difficult, but yes I will take a look back a fix everything soon.


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