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Review:Celtic_Dreamer7 says:
Awww. . . that was cute!! I, too, wrote a portrait piece for MyMyMiss' challenge and haven't had the opportunity until now to read any of the other submissions.

I found this to be a great insight to several characters from the stories. Back story of Peeves and a look at Sirius, that was a great touch. It really draws the reader in, making it even more believable to be part of the real books. I didn't see any misspellings or grammatical errors. Forgive me for not knowing, but were those actual names of former Headmasters? If not, they certainly sounded like it. My only recommendation/c.c., I would have loved to read more of the actual journey from one portrait to another is like. Is it a like a dark tunnel or hallway or something entirely different? I know we will never know for sure, but its nice to hear what other people think as well. Great job.

~Celtic~

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I won't exactly call it cute, but haha thanks!

I am pleased you liked the backstory of Peeves and a glimpse into Sirius. I was a little worried whether it was believable or not but this eased my worries. Yes, these were all actual names of Headmasters - according to the Harry Potter wiki at least =) I wanted to include the actual journey too, but honestly speaking, I'd no idea what it'd be like. However, if one day I suddenly get the creative idea of how the journey is, I'll definitely come back and edit it in. Thank you for your kind words once again!


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