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Review:Celtic_Dreamer7 says:
This was brilliant. Is it wrong that I imagined Merlin to be the cartoon Disney version throughout reading this? I caught a few left off punctuation marks and a few misspelled words. One run on sentence I would like to point out - "As he gathered the rest of his herbs and began to head back to his humble home he was again thankful that he had opted to build his house with stones and mortar rather than sticks and trees since he was certain that a timber home most certainly would not have survived these short six months since he had agreed to take on an apprentice." This would have sounded a little better and would have been easier to read if it had been broken into two pieces.

All in all a great piece, I really enjoyed it. The flow was great and it read like a true ancient story you would read in a book. This is definitely one I wish had a sequel. I like each of the "mini" adventures he had. Very fun to read and I enjoyed it immensely.


Author's Response: Ha Ha!! I totally was thinking Disney Merlin too!! I'm glad someone else picked that up!! Hee Hee!!

Thanks for pointing out the punctuation thing. Sometimes my fingers just seem to move faster than my brain when I am typing these things out. (I think I have them fixed up now.)

I'm glad you liked this. I was actually pretty nervous about it since I just finished a King Arthur Literature class at my muggle university and was afraid that I might not do the piece justice!

Thanks a bunch for the review!!

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