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Review:soapman333 says:
There's a third chapter to this story, so I'm reviewing it! BAM!

Albus wakes up and compares his wife to different princesses. What. A. Boss!!! All I can think about when waking up is whether or not to add sugar to my coffee.

A tangent comment: James' wife is named Ellie?! YES!!! I'm writing a novella where James falls in love with a girl named Ellie! I'm geeking out right now.

Okay, I'm really liking this short story. Little workaholic Allie-bear and his wife. It's fun to read what arguments they have for some reason. Maybe it's because I know she's pregnant and will probably start an argument over something silly, but it seems that Allie-bear is the one to do that. Silly Albus!

Awesome, I'm excited for the next chapter! Send me a link :D

Author's Response: ahah. yes yes it is! :P

hahaha yeah he is a little whipped :P YES thts her name!! I do love hoe those names go together!!

WHOAAA. COOL MAN. What a pro.

Will do!!

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