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Review:fauxthefox says:
Wow, this was heavy.

I always find it amazing when I come across someone here who can take a really sensitive topic and write it with maturity and realism, which you've definitely done. I think that the flashback was the strongest point of the story, because it was the longest, the most descriptive, and the most emotionally engaging.

I think you could have done a bit more with the ending. You got me thinking about the whole Azkaban thing, because it doesn't make sense to me that a case like this would land somebody there. But we've never heard of another place for people to go. It sort of brings up the question of justice and whatnot in the wizarding world, and I would have loved to have seen a bit of discussion of that. Then again, maybe that's not what on Georgie's mind at the moment. Some more detail about how Georgie's coping with the guilt and sadness would bring the story to the next level.

Nice work!
Faux

Author's Response: I am very very flattered by your words, thank you very much. :)

I'll look into expanding it and maybe writing a sequel to the ending which will explore Azkaban and the justice system of wizards more, but I really just intended this one shot to be about Georgia's guilt and sorrow.

Thank you very much for reviewing, I really appreciate it!


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