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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Hello there :)

This was a very powerful piece! I wasn't sure what exactly I was going to be reading because the summary meant it could have been either prisoner or visitor, but I really liked the mystery behind it. It added some nice suspense :)

I felt so bad for Georgia... The poor girl was being sent to Azkaban for something she didn't mean to do (or at least I don't think she did) and had her life ruined because of a super quick impulse. If I was in her situation, I would probably do the same thing. I bet she was terrified of her dad physically and emotionally and just wanted to keep him as far away as possible.

I really liked your descriptions in here, especially the ones about the boat ride and the passengers. I could never imagine having to ride in a boat in the middle of the freezing sea knowing the impending horror your life is going to be. The fact that she announced to no one in particular that she was seasick really made me sad for her. No one on that boat cared about her in the slightest and she basically had no one left. She's going to be all alone in Azkaban for something she probably didn't even mean for to happen. :/

On a side note, it was nice to read a story where you had literally no background information of the characters. The readers get to decide for themselves what Georgia and her father look like, what their relationship was, where her mother is, and so on. Then they also get to think about things later on in the story like what happened during her trial, how long and hard it's going to be for Georgia in Azkaban, and most of all get to decide for themselves if she should really be going there or not. I know I feel bad for her and don't really think she should be going, but that's just me. I know she killed her father, but she was also protecting herself.

anyways, great story! Really got me thinking about self defense and those kinds of things and how hard it must be for people to be in Georgia's situation.

-Amanda

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