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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hello again! Cliches are sometimes the most fun to write though because then you can twist them so they're not. :) I'm curious to see what goes on since Hermione is the only female in the group and Ron will be left all alone at home. I know you have a beta, but make sure she edits for too long sentences--you have a couple of run-ons that kind of ruin the flow. Other than that, your consistency is great! Keep it up! xx

Author's Response: Hey it's so nice to see you back again!

Yes, that was my reasoning when I did the whole Uprising thing, as I wanted to be able to put my own spin on it, so hopefully it won't be a cliche anymore!

I think Hermione is probably use to being the only girl around, but I agree I think it may affect the dyanmic of the group, due to her being more rational and pragmatic than the others.

I can never seem to get to grips with the run-on sentences, as much as I review them, they still appear, so I'll make sure when I edit this chapter again, I get rid of them!

Thank you for this lovely review, and the next chapter should be up sometime next week :Dxx

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