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Review:James2009 says:
Hello! This was a nice chapter, I was kinda sad to see James have his fluke moment but I had faith you wouldn't leave us with such a bad moment. The Artemis part was kind of out of the blue, considering the only real hint was the chapter image but it was a nice surprise, although I though she was significantly older than James. I really enjoy that you are portraying the lifestyle that James chose as not ideal, and that even though he is living his dream he acknowledges that it comes with a price. A price he is needs to come to terms with. I'll be honest, right now I am sort of leaning towards Ali above Artemis, I have always been a huge Jartemis shipper, but lately I feel that Ali understands what James is going through, both in his professional life and his personal while artemis just kind of blames James. I hope we see some more of them (Jali maybe?), yet I feel that the code won't really allow it, and I am not sure how would look for James to have hooked up with both his fellow chasers. Finally I am slightly worried that Ali is going to be the chaser that gets injured to make way for the douche-y reserve, but hope I am wrong.
Good to have you back, great way to spend my day relaxing from uni work,

Author's Response: Haha yeah, it was out of the blue. I wanted the chap image to be another member of the team so I figured she would be very suitable since she is mentioned in this chapter.

She's not significantly older, but not exactly closer to his age either.

Did you mean Avery as opposed to Artemis?

I wouldn't lean toward Ali just becuase she already knows the lifestyle and has been living it and has learned to control it. Avery is in the same boat as James. Unfamiliar. Alone. Trying to figure things out.

Thank you so much for the review! I'm really enjoying your thoughts on it :)

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