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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is a truly fascinating story! It contains brilliant description of the in depth thoughts of Snape, and more outer depth thoughts - leaving the reader satisfied yet unsatisfied with still some questions that was very artfully balanced by the writer.

This chapter gave us a useful sight in to the depth of Snape's character, and it's good you touched down that earlier one - bringing Lily in and him meeting her so early on in the book when this is a life-long desire. However, you handled it very well and it is appropriate for this story. I love the dialogue - it's very realistic and believable and really makes us grow affectionate towards the characters. The language you use and the style in which is you write is very readable and grips the reader.

An altogether interesting and awesome piece. Well done :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! you made my day with this! :) This is my first experience with writing FanFic so I am understandably nervous about it. You feedback helps a ton!! Hope you continue to read on! :)

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