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Review:fauxthefox says:
I realized that I mixed up your character names (Lorcan/Lysander) in the last chapter and now I feel like an idiot.

Anyway, this is definitely what I was hoping to get after the first chapter. Lorcan is a well-rounded character, and his relationship with Dominique is a many-tiered, three-dimensional one. Your characters are definitely a strong point of the story, because they seem very human and interact in human ways. Even their dialogue seems natural.

Again, I wouldn't have minded a bit more description of the settings in this chapter. There's no desperate need for it, though. I was so caught up in Lorcan that I didn't really mind. :)

Another great chapter, can't wait to see where this goes!
10/10
Faux

Author's Response: It's okay, I knew what you meant. :)

I'm so glad that you like the characters and the relationship between Lorcan and Dom.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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