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Review:Miss Muggle says:
Yowza. It's difficult for one-shots to make me want to cry, but you did it. Maybe I'm just a sucker for forbidden love.

The flashbacks showed the contrast between the happy past and violent present extremely well. Almost too well. One second it's a devastating torture scene then it's a cute date.

There were a few typos that I noticed. For example, "two different planets spinning on different axles." I think that you meant "axes" instead of "axles" That isn't something spell check would pick up so it would help for you to comb through one more time.

The plot is both original and recognizable at the same time. The idea has been seen so many times before, but you still make it new and heart wrenching. Kudos!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the review! I'll be sure to change that :)

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