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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Amanda!

I saw that a new chapter was posted today, so that was motivation for me, to catch up with this story!

I really liked Cedricís perspective at the beginning of this chapter. You depicted his pain really well, and made it so life like, it made me feel really sorry for poor old Cedric. You wouldnít have thought he would make so many observations on the world around him, but he did, and that was a really pleasant surprise.

I saw he noticed a ginger patient though, that couldnít be one of the Weasleys could it?

I liked the interaction between Cho and Cedric, even though it was just her doing her rounds, you seem to show that in a rather humorous way, so Cedricís sort of annoyance about being there, and Cho trying to get on with her work made me laugh. I really liked the ending of their meeting, with Cho blushing, and Cedric thinking it was nice to meet her. I think it was the subtle hints about a possible future relationship for both of them which was really sweet.

I really love how you make your stories so historically accurate, when I was reading this chapter, it really felt as if I was in a hospital during world war one. Even the use of magic didnít seem out of place here, in fact, it felt as if it was meant to be there, and there was hospitals for muggles and wizards.

I really liked this chapter, in fact I think it was my favourite out all of the ones Iíve read so far!

-Kiana!

Author's Response: I figure all Cedric has now is time. He doesn't know when he'll get to go home again, and he has some indeterminate time ahead of him for his recovery, and so he chooses to spend it taking everything in and trying to make the best of a difficult situation. When he's not watching Cho, he has plenty of other interesting stuff to look at, as you can see.

Not quite. But they aren't left out, trust me!

I love the awkward fluff between Cedric and Cho. I can only imagine that that's how it must have been in canon, considering that she seems a little nervous there and he isn't always totally cool and confident. The ship intrigues me a lot, and this is just my spin.

Thanks for yet another fantastic review!

-Amanda


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