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Review:marauder5 says:
Another spectacular chapter!! I loved the fact that you wrote the beginning of this chapter from an outside perspective - yours was as suitable and perfectly well written as those that JKR gave us in her books. Well done.

As much as I hate seeing Harry and Ginny fight, I think Ginny's feelings are credible. I can imagine her missing her 'other life', even if she loved James to death.I guess it's a bit of the pregnancy hormones as well. I'm just glad that they made up - they are such a lovely couple, and especially in your story.

The ending was surprising, and a bit of a cliff-hanger. I can't wait to read the rest of it. It will be interesting to see how an encounter with the Durely's after all those years will work out. I actually just wrote about Harry and James running into Petunia in one of my stories (even though it's far from being published here yet), and it will be really funny to see your version of him meeting them again. Of course, the circumstances are a bit different here, with Vernon being dead. I can't wait to read your next chapter, and I hope that you will update soon! You should be very happy with this one, by the way :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for saying that. I was really quite nervous about stepping out of my clan of Weasleys, Potters and Grangers for such an extended chunk of a chapter but I'm glad you think it was appropriate!

It's good to hear that you can see where Ginny is coming from. I hate seeing them fight too (although it was oddly fun to write), but everything can't be perfect all the time. I think that hormones and tiredness certainly play a part in Ginny's feelings - although that doesn't mean they're not legitimate!

Yeah, I reckon it's time to shake this little fluffmonster of a story up a bit, so here's my cliff hanger! Haha. Don't worry though, The Blossoming is definitely not about to become an 'angsty-Harry's piece.

The next chapter is definitely on its way. Thanks so much for R&Ring! :)


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