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Review:patronus_charm says:
Fabian and Gideon are just so cool. I canít believe they actually broke into the Ravenclaw common room, and now they want to set a badger loose in the Hufflepuff one! You mentioned the name Frank, is that Frank Longbottom? They seemed to get quite side tracked though, moaning about how the puffs could get a midnight snack, and how they couldnít cast the charm!

That made me laugh so much, first the rabid badger trying to run away, then the twins trying to get Arthur to force it through the door. Then Molly turns up, and I was worried she was going to react the same way she did last time, and then she goes and kisses him! I didnít expect that, but it was a pleasant surprise.

You write the friends interactions really well, and itís all so funny! I loved Reidís reaction to Arthur having his wand eaten! I can also see where the Ďyes Molly dearí came from, and its funny to see that Molly wasnít so keen on it at first!

Another great chapter!

Author's Response: I adore those two. Twins are so fun. Mine are hilarious, they're always up to something. I'm pretty sure it's a twin boy thing, they egg each other on. Frank is Frank Longbottom, yes! He's an occasional partner-in-crime for the Prewett boys.

The badger chapter is probably my favorite in this entire story! It just cracked me up writing it, and I think the kiss is hot. I need a life, I'm aware of this XD I'm so glad I could make you laugh!

The boys' dorm scene afterward was fun too, super happy that you liked it! Yeah, he started on the "yes dear" early, but she was mostly suspicious of it at first haha. Later she's secure in her ability to keep him under her thumb (or at least for him to seem that way, and keep it behind her back when he isn't).

Thank you very much for the review!


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