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Review:dreamer21 says:
Hi There,
By the end of the story I was hoping for a happy ending that got Teddy to confess. :(
I'm glad you've kept it realistic. You are very good at describing emotions and what the character feels but there was too much of emotion in Teddy than usual? From what I've noticed boys tend to feel pain till a certain level and then they just stop. Dominique seemed to have lacked expression in that department.
And isn't it a bit abrupt that Dom spent the whole last night with him and then randomly announced her wedding? Teddy had been engaged the whole time so why did she do it now? Why not later or earlier? Maybe if they had a fight and she announced her wedding would make more sense than she spending the whole night making love and doing that. It just seemed to be out of place.
Other than that. Thumbs up!
I didn't mean to be harsh, I like this story and you're a great author.
-xx
Em

Author's Response: no prob. im glad you liked it ! though thanks for pointing out problems =)

Well it depends. Teddy in this story and my head sometimes just feels more pain due to his parents dying and all of that. It was kind like Harry in the 5th book where he just flipped all the time :P

There is a reason why she announced her wedding and Im kinda working on a prequel to that like right now!


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