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Review:Celtic_Dreamer7 says:
This was a very well written one shot. I enjoyed it immensely. I didn't even know this was a challenge story until I read the prompts at the bottom. I love the details of how the school had changed since Professor Snape had taken the Headmaster's job. I also love the few lines with Dumbledore's portrait, a great touch. I didn't see any misspelled words or grammatical errors. I love reading stories like these, missing moments that you know probably happened but never had the opportunity to read. I usually don't read stories with the Gryffindors has the main characters but I love your portrayal of Ginny and Neville. Adding Luna in the mix was a great touch, she is one of my favorite characters and you wrote her very well in character. Again, a great start to your writing career her at the archive. I hope to read more from you in the future.


Author's Response: Celtic! I squealed very loud when I saw that you left me a review. It means a lot to me! Thank you very much for taking the time and reading this.

Oh wow...I clicked preview and all my review response is gone. And it was the perfect review response *cry* Let's see if I remember how I phrased everything...

I don't usually get people commenting on my details so it was a very pleasant surprise to see you pointed out Dumbledore's portrait. I had a real emotional moment when I wrote that because in my mind the only one that knows the password is Snape so this was like a reflection of his feelings towards Dumbledore. I don't think for a minute that Snape never felt remorse for killing the Headmaster. This was a perfect opportunity to show that he still thought about him. And now I'm sad again...

I feel very honoured that you read my story, especially since you said you don't read stories that centre on Gryffindor characters. Luna is a character that's very dear to my heart and I was really nervous not to ruin her character. I'm relieved I didn't :D

Thanks again for stopping by and for the encouragement. I hope to have other stories up soon enough ;)

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