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Review:aquabluez17 says:
hey!

aww so Ellie is feeling really sick which kinda sucks. Im glad you dont have Ellie completely hating James which makes the story really interesting. I wonder when he will find out about her "virus"

I think a bit more detail about the surroundings could really add to the story and help it become awesome :P (like the great hall or maybe the hospital wing.

great update though!

Author's Response: Oh yes, I have a horrible habit called "the talking head syndrome" where I hide behind my dialogue. I'm trying to develop and add more details to my stories, and I'll get to that point soon :D

Awesome, glad you like it and thanks for reviewing my silly story!

Jack


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