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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Jami!

You made me worried with Remus! I think it was due to Sirius’s reaction, as he usually seems so level-headed, and for him to then freak out, it was rather shocking for me! It was surprising that he saved him as well, but it seems like he would have a hidden talent!

I liked that little scene of Lily in the girl’s dorm, it was nice to her reminiscing. I didn’t realise that there were any other seventh year girls, other than the ones mentioned, but I’m glad that there are, as it makes more sense in my head for some reason! I loved Belle’s reaction to being woken up, it seemed so typical of her. I loved the mentions of Fabian and Gideon, and Molly and Arthur it just made the story more special.

I loved Augusta! What she said, just made me laugh so much! The fact that Alice had the hips for it, but they should still use protection. I wonder what she made of Alice being a relatively young mum, and then being faced with bringing up the said child.

Yay for Snape! I know you don’t like him, but he’s one of my favourite characters, so I was really pleased to see him popping up here :D I thought it was really touching that he gave Lily that photo, as it shows that he still cared for her. Then the fact that she was rather civil to him as well, was a nice surprise, as it showed that there was still a bit of hope in their friendship.

I like the friends reaction to him talking to Lily, it seemed very in character. Alice greeting him cheerfully, and still being nice to him. Then Belle being angry, and sending him death threats. She could just be like that for a whole chapter, and I wouldn’t get bored!

I just thought it was a typical quidditch trials. I have to agree with Lily and Alice, James just seems to have some natural leadership quality about him, and I really liked it. You actually managed to make the quidditch trials rather interesting, as they’re usually boring so yay for that! Then the ending I didn’t expect that, I kept on waiting and waiting for the revelation in each chapter I read, and now we finally got it!

WOW! WHAT! PLOT TWIST! I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO SAT! WAH! It all makes sense to me now, well the beginning part at least! I did not see that coming, it was really well done, and I like the use of the British words ;) I don’t really know what to say, my thoughts are just all jumbled. I want to feel sympathy for everyone, even Sirius, and I’m still not sure whether he deserves it or not, I’m so confused! Wah!

Lily is just wonderful! I don’t think I could have been like that to Sirius, yet she showed him so much compassion, and it was as if she was comforting him, not he comforting her. Lily is just awesome really!

It was sort of unexpected and expected what James did. I can see why he was angry, as his best friend sort of killed his sort of girlfriends parents, but Lily was telling him not to get angry, yet he still lashed out. At least Remus and Belle stuck by him, and Belle’s words were so true! And you left me on a cliff-hanger!

I think this was the best chapter so far, mainly due to it being so jaw-dropping, that my jaw is still hanging out!

-Kiana!

Author's Response: Hi Kiana! Sorry responses are taking me so long :(

I'm so happy that I got you a bit scared at the start of this. I think Sirius would absolutely be the best equipped out of the group to deal with dark sort of magic, like a werewolf bite.

Hahah I had a lot of fun writing Augusta in this scene! I think exploring other canon character through different eyes than what Harry sees them through is a really fun part about this era!

Severus was really hard for me. I can't tell you how much of a relief it is that a Severus fan thinks I did him justice! I tried to keep all my biased feelings out of it :P

Quiddich is SO boring to write, haha. The trials were hard for me to get through, but you're so sweet to say that they kept you interested ♥

Eeek!!! I'm so happy you finally know the secret!!! I felt so bad for all the characters during this :(. Sirius just killed himself over it, and James lets his emotions get too far ahead of him and ugh.

Awww Kiana you're reviews always make my day so much better. I love how into them you get. It makes me feel like I really am creating an interesting story. Thank you so much for stopping by ♥

The next chapter is another intense one as well, so I hope you like that! It's a shorter one too... I didn't even know I could write short :P

Thank you so much again for all of your amazing compliments on this story ♥

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