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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello there Iím from the Ravenclaw review tag! Iím excited to read yours, as you made an awesome banner a couple of weeks ago, and whenever I see it, I still things itís the coolest one ever. So thank you for that, and on with the review!

I have to admit I at first thought this was from Scorpiusís perspective, but I was pleasantly surprised, to see it was from his sisters. Iím not a big fan of the whole ĎDraco had another childí stories, but this one seems to be off to a good start, due to the differences youíve shown between them. I liked the idea of Laila and Scorpius not getting along, and there seems to be jealously there as well.

You seemed to have included some mystery as well, with Laila not being Astoriaís daughter, and the whole eating and hanging out with the Slytherinís thing. I did find it a little confusing though, if sheís good friends with Albus, why was she always with the Slytherin, so that perhaps needs some clarification.

Other than that, I can see this story is off to an interesting start!


Author's Response: Hello! Glad you liked the banner ;)

Laila and Sorpius do tend to fight alot (something you'll see in some upcoming chapters) and being in the same year doesn't help them at all :/ Somehow, i was able to make them keep the peace for two chapter but as I was writing the 4th i realized they were back at it again XD

and as for the Al thing, it's because he's in Slytherin :)

Thank you for the review!!

-Sankavi ^_^

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