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Review:soapman333 says:
Oh, I've (kind of) read this story before! I might have already left a review on it too, but, eh, here's another more verbose one!

Such an interesting plot. I'm excited to see where it goes.

I'm also a fan of how this story follows our favorite series with the dementors and wee little Luna reading her magazine. I'm guessing it's Harry Freaking Potter's third year, and our little narrator is the same age as Freddie and Georgie? Awesome.

Hagrid's in this story?! Hey Hagrid! Remember that time when you gave Dudley a pig's tail?! Aragog is a cool name for a spider! I named my fish "fluffy," are you proud? Hagrid, just say that you're proud of me D:

Oh illuminate, are you rolling your eyes at me? I'm sorry...

I think you've effectively described the awkwardness/gloominess of someone who has to change schools a good chunk of the way in (maybe like senior year for us muggles). This character had a lot happen to her and I've immediately taken with her story.

Awesome start. Feel free to re-request :D Although, this review wasn't very good...I like this story!

Jack

Author's Response: Hey! I don't think you're allowed to post two reviews on one chapter, unless you were using a different account or were anonymous xD But I'm glad you're reviewing all the same!

I'm really happy you're liking it so far. Ha, a fish is probably the only pet you could have that's not fluffy!

Thank you for the review!


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