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Review:miss_lestrangexoxo says:
The last chapters took a wild turn of events, but i loved it. I do wish you should have wrote it longer with more detail though! Make more problems that went between them, maybe make them question why they had a connection, and show the changes in hermiones mindset. one second she hated him, one second she was begging to be near him. also, i would have loved if the ending was told from harry and ron on earth, and if you explained how they died. Constructive critizism! the story line was amazing though:)

Author's Response: It was a short story, I planned it as 5 chapters, it wasn't supposed to make total sense, it was supposed to be misjointed in places. It whole point of her hating him then begging to be near him was that things don't work out in a structured way because it is not reality, they're dead.

It was really just a cloud of a story I had in my head which I decided to transform into a barely good story.

Thanks for the constructive critizism tho.

~Zyii


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