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Review:Courtney Dark says:

This was a great prologue, it really was. It was honestly everything that a prologue should be-creating questions, rather than asking them and creating mystery and suspense. I already have so many questions flitting around my mind, and now I am desperate to know more!

I have never read a story like this but it is stylistically brilliant, and definitely the sort of thing that I'd like to start reading a bit more of. I'm wondering where this place Molly goes to is-I'm thinking inside a book, at least in her head, but I've never been very good at guessing.

I can't wait to read more!


Author's Response: Hey there - thanks for dropping by! :)

Thanks so much! I always find prologues really hard to start because it's difficult to know how much to put in them, you know, and how much to leave out - so I'm so glad that you think it worked! As for the questions... well, I couldn't possibly give anything away, so you'll have to read to find out ;)

Mm... part of your comment about the 'place' and Molly is pretty good... can't say which part, of course... thanks! The whole style and voice and person was a completely new thing for me, so I'm happy you like it!

Thanks so much for this lovely review!

Aph xx

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