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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
I thought this was a nice summation of the feelings the Founders had towards each other, and I liked their physical markers with honeysuckle hair, facial scruff, etc. It was a visual image with just enough details.

I particularly liked your portrayal of Slytherin's appearance with dead, dull eyes and thin scars gouged in his face. Your word choice in describing him brought to mind an almost cartoonish sort of villain, with 'minions' and delighting in watching others suffer. As there are quite a lot of villains like this in canon (Vernon Dursley is remarkably unforgiving and one-note), I don't see this as anything negative.

Helga sounds quite nice, giving everyone a chance regardless of background. Rowena is at once fair but still placing her allegiance with Godric; your description of Godric with a 'heart like a dragon' was very apt.

There were a few typos, which made the sentences somewhat hard to read, and since you did not identify which characters were which in the separate scenes, it would have been helpful to make their individual passages longer so that readers could better figure out who they were.

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