Iím back with another review!
I rather liked seeing Ginny in mother mode, because in the Harry Potter books, you canít really imagine her being one, so it was funny to see her shouting to James about her wand! I have to admit Harry and Ginny arenít a ship I particularly like, but in this chapter, you managed to make me aw over the cute fluffy scenes in it, and kudos for that, as that rarely ever happens!
I like how you showed that they werenít experiencing marital bliss, as that wouldnít be realistic. I thought it was cute that Harry brought James along to the matches, but I can see why Ginny was getting annoyed with him, just because she doesnít work doesnít mean she has to look after James all the time.
I liked that Harry and Percy were now friends, as I always felt sorry for him, as he appeared rather side-lined in the Weasley family, but here he seems to be more included. Itís just nice to see that even if itís to Ginny chagrin.
Ron is just great! The way he was getting so worried about not being able to eat, is so in character, and you havenít made him mean! I get so upset when I see that happening, as heís not mean, heís a pretty awesome guy actually, and you manage to show it here! Then Harry getting all embarrassed about what Hermione was going to show him. Those guys!
Aw I loved that whole reveal scene, it was just lovely! Then the way Ron was saying how it was nice that they would have a friend when they joined Hogwarts, it was just lovely, and left me with a fluff filed happiness glow (if that makes sense?)!
Ooh tension! Hermione with Ron about not being married! Then Harry and Ginny over Dean! Honestly Harry youíve got to get that beast of your chest, they dated years ago!
This chapter was just awesome, but the ending! I didnít expect Molly to be one for pre-marital sex!
Author's Response: Woo, I'm back with another response! (finally)
Oh Kiana, I'm so happy I made you 'aw' over Harry and Ginny. I know it's a ship a lot of people have trouble with, but I totally believe in it and I'm glad I've managed to portray their relationship in a way that you find sweet! And I'm glad you think I managed to portray Ginny the mum. It is hard to take a 16/17 year old character and turn her into a young mum a few years later, because we all change so much in our late teens and early adulthood, but I hope Ginny is still recognisable.
I feel sorry for Percy too, although I'm right there with Fred and George having no sympathy for him when he turns his back on his family. But I do think he's a bit of a lost boy, bless him. I think we'll be seeing him again soon!
Yay! You're so right! Ron is NOT mean! Moody? Sometimes. But really just awesome. And sweet. Heehee you pointed out one of my favourite moments - Harry worrying about what Hermione was about to pull out of her bag!
I aim for the fluff-filled happiness glow ;) But yes! Tension! You gotta have it. Oh, Harry is a silly billy sometimes.
Hahah, I'm delighted that Molly surprised you ;)
Thanks for the lovely review, I really enjoy reading what you've got to say!