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Review:soapman333 says:
Hey, I had to read Paradise Lost in college! Such a long book.but so much imagery.

Speaking of imagery...your story is jam-pack full of visual/auditory imagery that kept me reading until the wonderful/melancholy ending.

Regulus, as represented in this story, is the epitome of a "walking dead man," and for some weird reason (I might just be insane or something) I really liked reading it.

Kreacher's suffering that was only mentioned in one line really made an impact on me. You have a way of implying more than what you have written (did that make sense? no? Eh, oh well).

The ending was perfect.

Thanks for the wonderful read,
soapman333

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm doing book nine for A level currently. It's brilliant and everything, but I genuinely do not know how you managed to get through all of it.

I was wondering whether I hadn't gone too overboard with the imagery, actually - it's like, this guy is a zombie and then he's a wolf thing and then he's a zombie again and then randomly he turns into his brother. And then he turns into a zombie *properly*. XD

You know what, I really wasn't expecting Kreacher to have such an impact on people - I mean, he gets a whole chapter full of angst in DH, but yet that doesn't really get talked about in the HP fandom - so thank you for pointing that out to me!

Thank you so much for your very flattering review. And well done on your professorship! :)


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