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Review:megthechef43 says:
AliceWonders,

this chapter as short but wonderfully written. You did well with the descriptions of Diagon Alley and I like how you explained all the differences that Hermione was able to see and also the things that had remain the same such as the new muggleborn witches and wizards and certain shops.

Gosh, my heart stopped when she looked into his eyes and I'm guessing he must have changed so much in the past six-seven years that Hermione didn't recognize him. I think you did a fabulous job with the introduction of the two. It was natural and a good reaction from Draco. I can't wait to read more about Hermione's reaction.

Great chapter but I wish it was a little longer. I was just getting into the story and then blam it's over.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I know, I write short chapters, but I usually write short stories and can't seem to get out of that mindset. I can't really explain why she didn't recognize him though, except that it worked for the story. Maybe he stopped bleaching his hair or something:)

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