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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
This was a really cute one-shot! It's so interesting to stumble upon stories that were written prior to the release of Deathly Hallows, and reading authors' predictions of what events would be like. You were accurate about the weather being lovely and the bridesmaids wearing gold dresses, which I found impressive.

If only Ron and Hermione had talked things out like this so early on in Deathly Hallows like they did here! It was adorable how Ron kept beginning to compliment Hermione and then changing it at the last moment, talking about the lake and the sky. When he told her that her dress was gorgeous, I snorted out loud. Classic Ron! But in the end, he summoned the bravery to tell her his true feelings, and his bravery definitely paid off.

I've always felt that Ginny really got the sorry end of the stick when Harry cut things off before running away with Hermione and Ron. Ginny had to sit in school without her older brother or Harry, enduring it alone, wondering how they were. I like how you had them reconcile during the wedding here, so that even if they were to be separated they would still be together in spirit - still officially dating. Because honestly, Ginny has a point. The Death Eaters know they were involved in one way or another. I'm sure the children of Death Eaters who attended Hogwarts will have spilled all kinds of information about Harry, including his weaknesses. Harry having a girlfriend would be at the top of that list. It kind of amazes me that no one ever kidnapped her to torture her for information, now that I think about it.

Lovely one-shot!

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