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Review:Fawkes394 says:
Update! :D I've been waiting for ages to see this posted, haha. Jack. Is. So. Perfect. I don't suspect him any more, he's just too sweet to be bad for Lily, and he cares so much for her... Agh! He's so sweet! Why isn't he real?!

Lily has such a stressful life! How can she keep up with so much work and so little sleep hours? I would probably die because of the stress if I were in her place. There was something I didn't get, does no one know Lily was the one to create The potion? Why?

I really hope you and your friend are alright... or will eventually be alright?

PS: English isn't THAT bad... I don't like it very much, though, because as it isn't my first language I have to actually make a big effort to get good grades. Spanish is a lot better in my opinion :)

Author's Response: He is so cute, and so wonderful. And brilliant. Did I mention awesome? No, I didn't. I'm allowed to say that too. (Is it bad that I love one of my own, fictional characters? I think it's highly likely). Also, he's not real because perfection isn't allowed in humanity.
I don't think she really does. I mean, the friendship with Jack is already taking the strain on it, sadly :/ Poor girl. And I bad to come up with a bloomin' rota so I can keep up with her timetable as well! It's a nightmare, honestly.
She's okay, thank you :) Definitely improving.
PS. You have exceptional English when it's not your first language! You're Spanish? Sorry, but I find this SO cool. I never bothered to even TRY reading any French books when I was learning it- I admire you so much >.<
Thank you for reviewing again :)

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