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Review:soapman333 says:
What an adorable one-shot!

The flow of your story was just perfect. It wasn't too fast/too slow, and the ending left me wanting more :D

I really like your writing style. You have a talent of describing your characters in such a way where I was content with the information given, but I also wanted to keep reading to see how they develop.

Your characters are very interesting. Everything was given from ole' Teddy-bear's perspective so all the good traits about Victoire were brought out to make her seem like a perfect person (as anyone with a huge crush does) and all of the bad traits of Prangs were amplified to make him seem like the epitome of a jerk (like we all view the people we dislike). It was all brilliant!

Victoire here is a very independent and strong minded girl! Even I had a bit of a crush on her ;)

Teddy is intriguing to me. I didn't necessarily like him, but I respected what he had to say. I think I lost interest in him when he labelled Victoire as his own. So, it's a vastly different vision of the kid, and I find that to be interesting! Oh and the fact that he doesn't have control over his metamorphagus (I think I slaughtered that spelling), it gave him a quirk that I just enjoyed reading.

My favourite character is Hugo...I know he was seven, and his only purpose in this one-shot was to show how immature Teddy is, but, come on. He's a little firecracker! Stealing his father's wand?! Epic!

This was a very sweet story :)
Thanks for sending it to me,
soapman333

Author's Response: Hi! I really wanted to get a guy's perspective on this story, cause it's quite fluffy.

I find it interesting you didn't like Ted. When I wrote it I wanted to make him sympathetic with his somewhat different way of persuing Victoire, but kind of iffy with how he goes about it. In real life, nobody makes grand speeches and professions of love. Sometimes people are a little unhealthy about it xD

Thank you for your review!


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