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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello Again!

I liked how you made Hermione nervous about the result, it just seemed so realistic. I think the reason why it was so good, is that you made her notice all these little things, like Ron leaving the shampoo lid off, and it just made you realise how tense things were, and the fact that she thought of menial things like that contrasted nicely.

Hermione’s little ‘oh’, just made me laugh as it seemed like such an unlikely reaction to finding out that you were pregnant. I love all the little details you include, such as Ginny noticing that she wasn’t drinking, and Ron going into the kitchen. It just seems to create another dynamic to the story which I really love.

I loved that little scene with Ron and Crookshanks, it made me laugh so much to see how much Crookshanks had wrapped Ron round his finger, and Ron had to give into his demands about food.

I so worried about what Ron’s reaction may be to the baby, but I was so glad to see it was positive! I can see why something like not being married would worry Hermione. She seems like the type who needs security, so not having it must be stressful for her. He was so soppy though when talking about it, it was just so cute.

Aw it was just so cute how they were planning what their baby might be like, as it was nice to see them pick out everything they loved of the other person. Imagine if it turns out to be the complete opposite!

-Kiana!

Author's Response: Hi! Sorry it's taken a little while for me to respond to your lovely reviews.

I often find that it's the little things you focus during scary or life-changing moments... I think it's a coping mechanism! Plus, Hermione's a perfectionist. She really would notice Ron's habits like that, haha.

I love your comment on Hermione's little 'oh'! Hahah... I think it's fair to say that you can mentally add a little expletive after that.

Ron and Crookshanks' relationship here is similar to the one between my boyfriend and my cat, and also my dad and our old dog. Dad used to complain about the dog but I would always catch him stroking him and giving him food.

I really am glad that you can see why the marriage thing might worry Hermione - I didn't want to imply that parents need to be married! But I think it's just something that would be important to Hermione and probably also to Ron, who's grown up as the product of a very successful marriage, but probably thought he had a bit more time to plan for it.

I do love writing Ron being sweet. He IS sweet - this is the precise reason I started writing this story in the first place, to right some of the wrongs I've seen committed against Ron in FF ;)

Thanks for the review!


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