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Review:potterfan310 says:
So first of all I LOVE James/OC and I LOVE teen pregnancy :)

Second of all I'm really intrigued by this, it's a really good and I like your OC Mona. It'll be interesting to see how Cormac reacts when he realsies his little girl is pregnant.

There were a few little errors that can be easily fixed.
"Its you're a girl and you have aim, well, you are a freakin' BOY." - I didn't think this sentence flowed too well and it didn't make much sense even though I get what you mean.

"I'm going to have to tell him before Witch Weekly does." - I really like this sentence mainly because it shows that not only Mona is scared about them finding out but it also means that she is going to tell James!!!

I can't wait to see more of Mona and the other Weasley/Potters. Especially James and how he and Mona act together.

Hope this is updated soon as I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! :)

Soph xx :)

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