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Review:megthechef43 says:
Hello Jami,

I'm not going to lie; the word count on this chapter was daunting. Lol, but once I started reading the words flew by.

I think it is the little things that make a story. I love that you had a back story on her potions for her essay. I found it humorous that she is thinking she never met a werewolf and they are so uncommon because she is friends with Remus. A little bit of humor.

I could just James looking like he was about to jump up and down with excitement like a little kid at Christmas. This is so exciting for James!

I haven't said much on Peter because I dislike him too much. I like that no indication has been mentioned in your story. I mean to say that you don't have people disliking him or thinking he is a little rat. I find it hard to be impartial with certain characters but you do it well.

The memory was so sweet and personal for Lily. I almost forgot Lily's rough few months but the moment that sweater came out it was over for her. Remus is so sweet in taking care of her and saying the right things in her moment of distress. I'm glad Remus shared his story with Lily in a round-a-bout way. It showed his feelings on what had happened to him and in that moment I think I truly understand what Sirius and Remus had lost the night James died. Sirius lost his brother and Remus lost his entire family in one blow.

Gosh, it was such tense few moments as they listened in and then confronted the "Prospects". How was Bellatrix in the castle!?! I love the gesture of Remus handing Lily the piece of chocolate and the relation to Harry's first encounter with Remus. Dumbledore's reaction to the information doesn't surprise me at all because he always seems to be a step ahead of everyone else.

I am surprised McGonagall allowed the party but she is indeed and huge fan of Quidditch and I bet with James as the Caption she is sure they will win the Quidditch Cup.

OMG!!! JEALOUSY! Yeah, she might be refusing James but her heart isn't!! But then... Grrr...bring in the blond hunk. At least he is already jealous!

btw... Blonde is female and blond is male...

I'll be reading on...

Meg

Author's Response: Hi Meg!

I knowww! I have a problem with writing long chapters, haha. I'm so happy that once you got reading it went quickly, though.

I really had a hard time getting myself to like Peter. I finally got to a point where I twisted his story around a bit, and we made peace :P But it wasn't easy, haha.

I think that's one of the saddest things, is thinking about how much Sirius and Remus both lost the night James and Lily were killed. Gah ;(. It's all just so sad.

I'm not sure how Bellatrix is getting in the castle (insert pretend thinking face here). I agree, Dumbledore does really always seem to be a step ahead.

Okay. You have no idea how much I want to hug you. I always wonder why blonde and blond are both correct!!! I was working on the newest chapter today, and was so giggly when I knew why I was using a certain 'blonde' haha. Thank you for telling me that!!!

Thanks so much for this lovely review, m'dear! I've really enjoyed our review swap. Let me know if you'd ever like to continue swapping with another story on your AP!

Jami

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