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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Jami!

I知 admitting defeat about finishing this story by Saturday, as I知 only chapter 6 but hopefully I値l be up to date by the next Saturday! I値l also just quickly say I never thought about Amy Adams being Lily Evans, but since seeing this chapter image it does seem to fit her well.

The infamous Violet has reappeared! I was waiting for her to show up and cause havoc again! I loved when Lily was describing what had happened with James, that you made her say a muggle saying. That rarely appears, and it痴 actual quite strange. I think most people forget that Lily was brought up as a muggle. I知 really glad that nothing major happened between the two of them, but still kissing his neck is kinda weird.

I知 seeing hints of a possible relationship between Belle and Sirius here. That would be so cool, given how they池e both sort of aristocratic, and rich, and have family issues.

Ooh and another flashback! That was so cute Lily painting, I could imagine her being a good painter, and the fact that was painting a castle, is strange. Perhaps she痴 a seer? Her Dad seemed really nice, and it was just lovely to see what their relationship was like, as we learn so much about her that way. Lily had a granddad called Gallagher? Is he somehow related to the Gallagher brothers out of Oasis, or is this just a coincidence?

I loved how you focused on Lily and Petunia痴 relationship in this chapter. It was horrible to see how cut up Lily was about her sister ignoring her, as you really did feel for her, as it痴 not her fault that she痴 magical. That scene with Petunia making it up to her though, was very touching, and it was nice to see some happiness in their relationship.

I was getting a little worried then, about the argument between James and Lily. I just wanted to yell at her, for what she was doing. I mean James can稚 snog whoever he wants, he and Lily are made for each other, so it should only be her. Then Lily admitted she liked him! I was not expecting that, and I don稚 think James was either. It痴 nice to see that she does want to be with him, just not yet, but I can understand with her parents dying and everything. Then James was so sweet about it as well, it just made me aw so much!

THERE WAS SORT OF KISS! Ok it was on her forehand, and it was probably meant to show that he was fine with waiting and all! But there still was a kiss! Then Belle and Sirius had to come along and ruin it all! It made me laugh though, it would have been so funny to see them hiding out in the bushes.

I really liked Peter in this chapter, it was so nice to he can possess a bit of backbone!

I really liked the idea of the quidditch match it sounded like such fun! I always imagined Lily to be a quidditch player like Hermione in my head, so it will be interesting to see if that痴 the case or not. I also liked how you described Remus痴 views on his transformation, it made me view it in another way!

Another great chapter!

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: I love Amy Adams as Lily! She's not my 'perfect pick' since that probably only exists in my head, but most of her photos work really will! I just have to beg heartfelt/pheonixn (who does all my CI) to green her eyes up a bit :P

More about Belle and Sirius comes up next chapter! I'm happy you think they would be a good match :)

I love the idea of Lily having an artistic side. I'm happy you liked her flashback ♥ Nope, is Oasis another FF? My head canon has Lily being half Irish (on her mother's side). Her granda was born and raised in Ireland, and Gallagher is pretty much just a trademark Irish name, haha :P There's a nora roberts series (I'm sucker for romance stories) that uses that last name, and I think that's when I fell in love with it as a surname.

I'm so happy you like the bit of sister-ness in this chapter! We know it isn't just as simple as those two stopped talking for good, because of the letter Lily writes Sirius about Harry almost breaking the vase. And the fact that she goes to Petunia's wedding and her and James have the infamous dinner with Vernon and Petunia, so I really want to show the ups and downs of their relationship through these flashbacks. I feel like I just went on a super long tangent. Haha. Sorry. I'm drinking coffee while responding. Dangerous game, that is :P

I'm so happy Lily surprised you with her admission!! I know a lot of people play out the cat and mouse sort of thing a bit longer.. but Lily's just been through Hell. She lost her entire family for the most part. And James watched it all happen. They both grew up quite a bit over the summer because of that, and I wanted to reflect that with their almost kiss section. I'll though, I should warn you, it's still sometime before they both grow up and decide to date already :P!

Aww yay for Peter! I thought he was fun in this chapter, too.

Thank you so much for leaving me another amazing review &heart; and please know that I won't be at all sad if you don't review every chapter. Not that I don't completely love your reviews, I just don't want you to feel obligated! If you'd rather read a few before reviewing, I completely understand.

Thank you again, Kiana ♥ I'm smiling ear to ear over here ♥

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