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Review:Jchrissy says:

Okay I'm going to try and make myself start from the beginning. I really loved the small details you included about all the pureblood practices. Like Hermione having to sit to Draco's right and the host having to the first tester of the food.

Those are both small details, but the really do a lot to bring character to the story. We never learn a ton about pureblood way of life through JKR, and a lot of authors don't elaborate on details that aren't canon, so I always love those small creative add ons.

I was so nervous to where hermione was being taken. And then excited that the door came back into play!! Now we know why the H-E was so frightened of it!

Hermione's trick, using the imperius curse to make it seem like the girl was being tortured was a really really genius idea! And then Draco's revelation about where the arch actually led!! There were so many twists in this chapter and I loved every single one!

And she did such a good job covering up why she seemed upset with saying to Draco that it wasn't done!

I hope you continue this story! I've really enjoyed these chapters and can't wait for a new one!


Author's Response: Jami,

This was kind of a hard chapter to write because Hermione and Hailey are two totally different personalities. I knew I needed to stay true to both characters so that Hermione's cover wouldn't be blown and she was the really the sick a twisted girl she was protraying.

I think there must have been quite a few rules and practices in the pureblood soceity because it runs almost like a cult.

I'm so glad you liked the imperius curse idea, I've actually had it in the back of my mind for a while and this chapter was written so I could use it. :)

Thank for another great review. I hope you continue.


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