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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hi Amanda! So, I don't think there's too much dialogue at all. You have a nice balance and flow between narrative and dialogue, and I'm enjoying reading the dialogue between the characters because you've done a great job putting their characterizations into what each character are saying. I especially liked the bit that you added about Rose having to shorten everything in explanation to why she called Twinkle 'Twinkie' instead. It showed her as the diva she is, while Lily seems a lot more down-to-earth and level-headed. Over all, great chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, good! It seems like a lot more dialogue than I usually write, but maybe that's not a bad thing. It's really great that the characterization comes through even with the dialogue, like the example you mentioned with Rose and 'Twinkie'. Rose and Lily are definitely very different, and I think that makes them working as a pair more interesting. Hopefully you feel the same way.

Thanks for this fantastic review :)

-Amanda


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