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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Amanda, this chapter was humorous. I really like how you've characterized Rose and Lily, especially Rose because she's so different than the standard Rose that usually show up in fics. It's refreshing to read a story that has a whole set of different characterizations. That said, I like that you gave James a respectable job because it seems like he's the wanderer of the family in most fics so that was great to read. Respectability, in my opinion, suits James more than slacker does.

And the general overall flow of this chapter definitely made as much of a splash on my imagination as the first did. It's quite original and refreshing from all the cliche fics that are circulating the archives. (: Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Leslie! It's good that the humor came through better in this chapter--I'm guessing thanks to Rose and her high maintenance personality :) I don't read enough next gen to really be up on what the cliches are, but I did try to create interesting and hopefully unusual characterizations here. I'm happy it all worked.

Thanks again for this awesome review!

-Amanda


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