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Review:intothether says:
Okay, I guess I should feel bad for Ava. And I do, because you wrote her emotions down so perfectly.
However, at the same time, I can't help but dislike her a bit, considering she was the one who broke up with Ian in the fist place, and he did wait for her for eight months.

In fact, Ian doesn't seem like a bad guy. At all.
I think he would have been a quite likeable character if we were to read about him eight months back. Ava leaving him seriously messed him up.

Lastly, Louis.
If there is anyone I truly feel bad for, it's him. He doesn't deserve what Ava's doing to him. And I hope she gets it together and doesn't wreck it with him like she did for Ian.

Beautifully written as always.

Author's Response: I understand what you mean. Yes, she's in an awful place. Yes, she's absolutely devastated and heart broken. But let's face it - she did it to herself. He didn't want any of this to happen, but it did, and he's just protecting himself now.

He's not. He's really not. Hopefully that comes out.
He's a very likeable guy, in fact. There's a reason that as bitter and jaded as she is, she still managed to fall for him.

Yes, Louis.
Poor guy. She's seriously messing with his head and just dragging him around like a rag doll, even if she doesn't intend to. It's not right, but she does it anyway.

Thanks so much for the review ♥

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