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Review:soapman333 says:
Hello! Ohmygoodness, this story is about werewolves! YES!

Before I dive into geeking out about how awesome werewolves are, I want to comment on your writing style :D

Your intense visual/auditory imagery is amazing! It creates the tone of suspense, keeping me on my seat and living the action with Dominique.

This chapter is short, but it's a good kind of short. I like the brief introduction explaining why Dominique's there and introducing a few key points of the story. Like her job and her fear. All that being said, I really liked how you ended it. Bravo!

Okay, all that being said, I freaking love werewolf stories because there is so much you can do with them. There are the politics (discrimination, etc), dramatic transformations, potential for intense character developments, and just a lot of potential in general. I'm excited FOR YOU! My werewolf story is my favourite :D

Yay! Way to keep me invested from start to finish,
soapman333

Author's Response: Hey! Haha yes it is xP

I am glad you like my imagery, and that you enjoyed the suspense and action, thanks.

I am a person who usually writes short chapters so I hope you don't mind! I am pleased you liked the brief intro and the key points and such, as I was afraid it might be boring. I was not entirely sure if the ending was nicely done, but thanks =)

Haha you're right, I like werewolf stories too and this is my first time attempting them so I hope I can do it justice. My main focus here is how Dominique deals with it all, but I'll try to include all aspects I can.

Thank you so much for your kind words!

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