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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there! Thanks again for re-requesting:)

I actually think my favourite part about this chapter was the beginning conversation between Albus, Rose and Dom. God I love Dominique and your depiction of her is awesome. I LOVED the line: And also you need to see Pride and Prejudice, the TV version mind. Itís great, and this is coming from the girl, who doesnít like films when the guys donít take their tops off,Ē because it was just so perfectly Dom and made me have a little giggle. And because I'm sitting in a crowded room full of family members, I got some pretty strange looks.

I love the way you are interweaving the flashbacks and present say moments without disrupting the flow-it's very clever and something I think I would struggle at. It's nice to see Scorpius and Rose's backstory and I'm glad I know now why they broke up...although I do think Rose's reaction seemed a little rash and hasty-after all, this is her fiance she's breaking up with! But you said their relationship will be explored more, so I guess it's not just the moment you described that led to the break up. Though I have to admit, the idea of living in the mountains in Switzerland with cows does not appeal to me. I mean, living in New Zealand with cows is bad enough!

I liked how you mentioned Bill and Fleur's wedding and the fact that no-one else had had a wedding at the Burrow because it brought up bad memories. That was a nice touch, as was the fact that Rose said 'Itís odd how much those people mean to the older generations. To the younger ones, theyíre simply part of bedtime stories, and family members weíll never really know.' I thought that was a very accurate and thoughtful statement.

Great chapter.
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi Courtney!

I'm so glad that you liked Dom, as I know she's usually depicted like that, so I wasn't too sure about it! I'm glad that you liked the beginning conversation, as I loved writing it :D

I'm glad that the past and present moments worked well, as I've seen it done badly so many times, I was concerned about it. Yeah I wasn't too sure about Rose's reaction either, but I didn't want the flashback to get too long. I'll probably go back and add some more feeling to it though:) Yeah I love Switzerland, but living there would be pretty boring, and there are cows litreally everywhere there!

Yeah I wanted to reflected on the past, as it doesn't seem to feature much in next gen, so I thought I would be fun to add it in. I'm glad that you liked that quote, as it did seem true to me!

Thanks for a great review!
Kiana:D


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