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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Ooooh, this was a great chapter! And it actually made me really sad, though I don't really know why. I think it was partly because of all the farewells and end of an era and all that stuff...that and the fact that the dynamics between Eleanor and her friends on the train totally reminded me of me and my friends!

There are so many little bits and pieces of this chapter that I really enjoyed, that I'm going to struggle to name just a few. I think it's the little details that you include that I love most of all. Like Eleanor's failed attempt at a memory charm, Remus looking sad (intriguing, by the way-I want to know more!) and his rabbit supposedly eating his grandma (that line made me giggle-I already love Henry and Bertram!) I also liked Davey Grugeon and that mention of him and the Whomping Willow in his fifth year. That was a very nice touch-my mind instantly went to the books

I loved the little Quidditch talk about 'dating the enemy' that the boys had, because that's just so Hogwarts and their dynamics as a group were great. As I said before, I had this huge sense of sadness that they were all finished Hogwarts and beginning their adult lives...it's certainly a scary thought, but I'm glad Amelia and Eleanor are going to be sticking together.

Sirius and Eleanor's conversation was great, and now I'm wondering what Eleanor is going to decide...and how the events in the very first chapter are going to come about. Hmm, so many questions! I can't wait to find out the answers.

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Gah! Thank you Courtney! I'm really pleased you could connect to the farewells, the goodbye's and that it seemed like the dynamics between them are real. Friendships in FF can be overlooked sometimes with all the romance's that are splashed about (and there is nothing wrong with those because i like them too) however, it is a huge boost to hear that the dynamics in that moment seemed realistic. Like they were meant to be friends!

Bertram is one of my favourite characters here to be honest, he took me by surprise though when i wrote him because i hadn't really given him much thought. Just started writing him and it turned into what he is. He's a fun guy to write because he's quick and witty but incredibly loyal to them.

That moment when people leave school is always a little scary because suddenly you need to make decisions for yourself. You feel like you need to know everything and yet they are all very young and how can they be expected to know all that?

Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it so much!

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