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Review:megthechef43 says:
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This was quite heartwrenching in it's delivery. I was hoorible to read about him being in so much pain from lossing the love of his life to a ddeatheater. The sadness and heartbreak permeated the story through and through. I could feel his pain from the first sentence of the story. Great job.

I liked this story but for some reason it was hard to follow to me. I was trying to figure out what it was I think it had to do with the tense it was written in. I think grammatical it is correct but the reading was difficult for me. FYI, grammar is not my strongest attribute.

Great story and powerfully moving!

Meg

Author's Response: Hi meg! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you found this heartwrenching, and that the sadness and heartbreak and pain came through well as that was my aim. Thanks.

I am sorry to hear that it was hard to follow for you. I wrote it in a broken form of sorts to express Draco's state of despair. Grammatically it is correct though, yeah.

Thanks for your kind words anyway!


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