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Review:radicallyali says:

I like that picture. I approve.

What was Clint Lawson up to?
Having Scorpius wait on him hand and foot. Like usual.

Ali told me she didn’t have enough time to string a relationship together since she’d rather sleep in her spare time.
Me. Actually me.

I was a Quidditch player. I looked muscular and manly.
I’ve missed James’ inner monologue.

I definitely think the Ali and James could be really good friends.

James, Lily is your little sister. Of COURSE she’s spying on you for Avery.

By the time I arrived back I had myself convinced no one could know about the Code and Avery would have to move on.
Because that ended so well last time.


I almost laughed before realizing I had a poster of Henrik Lindt in my bedroom.
You better keep that in mind Jamesie.


Suddenly things did not seem as glossy as they had before
Sometimes reality just hits you in the chest like a ton of bricks and you remember that your life isn’t the only thing happening in the world. I think James is going to need some of these reminders as the story goes on.

You also just need a third party to tell all your problems to sometimes. A third party that isn’t your mom.

“Some say that shows favoritism,” Clara said.
I don’t like her.

“I also like boys who take a moment to realize I’m talking about them.” Shelby snickered as we headed back into the stadium through one of the locker room tunnels. “Think about it, okay?”
That one took me by surprise.

Albus rolled his eyes. “Story of your life. Eat some dinner”
Oh Albus.

Then I felt a hard slap across the face.
That was a long time coming. Or a chapter coming. Whatever. James really had it coming to him.

I feel like we’re really starting to get into the plot now. Which I am really excited for.

As for a real Hufflepuff, I’m pretty sure a picture of me comes up in the dictionary. ;)


Author's Response: OMG LOOK. A response.

So glad you approve of AliCat. You're spoiled.

Just pictured Clint Lawson sitting in one of those high-backed chairs with the pattern that made them look like a curtain out of The Sound of Music with Scorpius bringing him weinies on a silver platter.

can't blame you there. Sleep is important.

I love the Ali and James dynamic, though I'm disappointed so many people want them to be romantic. Does anyone think for a moment James could have feelings for anyone other than Avery? Let's be honest.

James knows nothing of spies. He needs to learn instead of just dressing up like a woman.

I love that James is a fanboy. One of my favorite qualities in him.

James will need quite a few reminders. But on the flip side, I think other people will need reminded that James isn't the same as he was in Hogwarts. Three games a year, bossing people around. He now has a ton of pressure on his shoulders being who he is, in the position he's in, and no one seems to be helping much either. Two way street.

You're very right not to like her.

Shelby ships herself and James so hard.

LOL Albus. Love him.

James did have it coming. In a few ways.

I'll look up Alejandro in the dictionary.

Thanks :) As always. Plastic horse.

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