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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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The first paragraph had some very effective descriptive language that really had a spooky feel to it, and the rest of the chapter seemed to follow with the same dark sense of foreboding.

It seems that Dominique is making a very foolish decision by entering the forest during the full moon, but on the other hand, we can tell that she enjoys breaking exclusive stories, and she is willing to go to great lengths for her job, but you still have to wonder what she was thinking.

It was interesting to see Dominique's reactions to werewolves given her family history, and I'm sure this will be explored some more.

There was a nice build up to the climax at the end, and while I had a pretty good guess where things were going, the bite can still be a bit startling. It will be interesting to see what happens to her next.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you liked the descriptions and it felt sort of spooky to you, as that was my aim.

Yes it is true, Dominique made a foolish decision but she loves her job too much to give it up!

Yes, her reactions will definitely be explored through the story gradually.

I am pleased that you liked the build up and the climax, and found it interesting. I hope you like the future chapters =)


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