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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hi Amanda, I really enjoyed this first chapter. I'll have to read the others soon. The main reason I liked it is that we're in a completely different work environment then the usual that is seen in stories; it adds originality that you thought to give Darcy a more unique job working for Witch Weekly. I also like the narrative tone over all as it flows fluidly and I had no trouble imagining the characters voices and seeing the scenes play out in my mind while I read.

As for comedy, there weren't any 'hahahah' funny moments for me in this chapter, but it definitely had that light, airy feel of a comedy. It felt like one of those stories that's great to read when you need to relax from a busy day/week. Anyway, for this being your first next gen and comedy-based story, I'd say you're hitting the atmosphere spot on and the characters, too. I'm definitely intrigued about this plan that Dominique already has for a cover story since I'm sure that will be key to the plot. Over all, great first chapter and I'll definitely be returning to read the other chapters as you've already got me hooked.

(: Leslie

Author's Response: Leslie, thank you so much. It was really sweet of you to do this for me, and I'll have to stop by when I get some time and return the favor :)

It does seem like most everyone in fanfiction graduates and becomes an Auror, teacher, or Healer, and so I really wanted to try something different. It's great that you liked the flow here and found the plot interesting.

I don't tend to write 'hahaha funny' comedy, sadly. It's something I've never been able to get right. I hope there will be some funny moments as the story progresses, though--I have one particular chapter in mind for that. I am pleased to hear that this is a good story for relaxing and just delving into a new world. Also, I hope you do come back to visit soon!

Thanks again for this wonderful review.

-Amanda


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