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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey! Great update!

So someone is out to get Flora I see. I wonder if it's related to her title in the Muggle World since you mentioned that the person didn't attack with a wand.

I noticed some tense errors in the story, especially in the beginning. You were using the present when you were referring to the past

"Why would I need a bodyguard?" I ask again, louder this time, but Albus continues to ignore me as Beckett .."

I think it would be continued though you might have purposefully written it like that so sorry if you meant it like that!

Can't wait to read more! Great update and I think it was relatively early =)

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