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Review:patronus_charm says:
I keep on seeing this story being updated, and not reading it, so at least I can catch up on it now!

I really love how you keep on surprising me in this chapter. First of all, James is a lawyer, and Iíve never seen that done before, so I really liked it, as it added some originality to a very worn out character. I loved the little characteristics you gave him, such as him scoffing, and finding the whole idea ridiculous, it reminded me of his namesakes!

Haha you made Lily and Rose go to court! Iíve never seen that done before! That was another great twist, as Rose is usually the next Hermione, so it was nice to see that she had a bit of spirit in her! I can just imagine them Ďfrolicking in a fountainí!

I also really liked the idea of Rose and Lily being some sort of celebrities. Usually theyíre shunning their parents fame, yet here they seem to be enjoying, and they have Albus as their sort of manager, and James as their lawyer. It just made me laugh so much! It reminded me of the Hilton sisters, and other famous heiresses :D

I will definitely be coming back to this story, as it just makes me laugh, and Iím really loving the new Rose and Lily in this chapter, itís so refreshing to see, that an author can make them original and fun again!

-Kiana:D

Author's Response: Hey Kiana :) Thanks again for the swap!

I don't know how James became a lawyer, but I do think he fits pretty well. It was a ton of fun to watch the Potter-Weasley children squirm in court and have to pay for their impulsive night out. I'm happy that Rose seemed non-cliche to you in that she's been doing some things her mother likely wouldn't.

I can definitely see a scenario where the children resent being in the spotlight, but I liked this lighter version where Rose and Lily soak up the limelight a little. For James and Albus, it isn't quite as tantalizing, but I think they all recognize that they're young and enjoying themselves is perfectly all right.

Thanks so much for your lovely review :) I can't wait to see what you think of chapter three!

-Amanda


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