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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello!

I saw that you said it only had two reviews, so I decided to come and add to the amount, as your work is usually great, so I knew this would be too!

I loved Dom from her first appearance, she just seemed great. She just appeared to have something special about her, and even though she was moaning about the place, it made her appear more human, which is something that people often forget to make their characters be.

Even though she had close ties with werewolves, due to her father being scarred by one, and Remus as well, it shouldnít mean she automatically loves them, and has no reason to fear going to a werewolf den. You wrote her fear really well, I almost felt as if I was the one going near werewolves. Just a quick little note, it was cool that you made her a journalist, as I can definitely see her be one.

So her and Teddy have been dating for a while then? I canít wait to find out some backstory to that, like how they got together, and how Teddy and Victoire broke up! I hope that you havenít made Victoire hate them, as I think the Weasley bonds are so strong, they wouldnít still be falling out over something that happened two years ago.

I really loved those little details you included. One example was that Dom was a Ravenclaw, that shows sheís different to the Gryffindor Weasley family, and it will be interesting to how thatís developed further. Also the fact Hermione helped werewolf rights, was great, and seemed very in character for her!

The ending was great as well, with Dom being bitten, as I didnít expect for that to happen, and I canít wait to see how thatís developed as well!

I thought that this was a great start, and Iím really glad that I checked it out. Do carry on writing it, as it would be a shame to give it up!

-Kiana!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. You're awesome!

I am glad you liked Dom since her first appearance and found her to be human.

Her fear of werewolves is an important aspect, so I am pleased that you thought it was justified and normal. I always imagine Dom to be a journalist for some reason yeah :D

The backstory to Teddy and Dom's relationship will be explained around chapter 3 or 4, and I hope it meets your expectations. Don't worry, I believe that the Weasleys wont fall out over something that happened 2 years ago so relations between Vic and Dom are fine. You'll see that in chapter 2. As for how Vic is fine with it all, it might be shown in chapter 3 or 4 =) I hope you enjoy those aspects when they're revealed.

I am pleased to see that you noticed the little details of her being a Ravenclaw, and that Hermione helped werewolf rights - I always like putting in such minor details so good to know they're appreciated.

I am glad you liked the ending and I hope you're satisfied with how I develop it further.

Thank you so much for checking this out and I hope you come back for future chapters. Thanks!


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