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Review:tragicYETmagic says:
This chapter was great, I loved it.
It makes so much sense that Sev now thinks he joined the Order to protect Lily. I can't wait to see what happens next. The flash of a memory with Beth was a perfect ending to the chapter as well and also the way that Sev's mind feels now after having so much removed. I've always wondered what it would feel like and you wrote it so realistically.

Magic xx

Author's Response: It's so great to hear from you on this story! :) I'm pleased as punch that you liked the chapter, too. Writing that Severus thinks he's doing all this for Lily has taken some getting used to, but there is hope in the memory flashes, of course. Those are pretty important to the rest of the story, too -- keep a lookout for them!

Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter for me. ♥ It was fantastic to see your name in my unanswered reviews stack again! I really, really hope you enjoy the rest of Breaking Even!!

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