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Review:megthechef43 says:
Hello Jami,

On to Chapter 3!!

In the beginning when Lily is trying to not forget her parents but could still feel the happiness of being home made me happy because I want Lily to recover from the death of her parents. If anything could do the trick it would be Hogwarts.

I think McGonagall was perfect with her statement to Frank. I can just hear her prim British voice stating that line.

Squeal! She felt a spark. I'm grinning from ear to ear at the moment.

The Darkness is descending on them in their final year. Darkness=Voldemort. I love you have mentioned it only briefly instead of dwelling on it. I think at this stage in the game Voldemort is more of a threat than an actual enemy. That will change though.

I love the little details in this chapter such as the wardrobe you just toss your clothes into and it will fold and hang them up. I really need one of those. I also like the broom cleaning station for James. It was a nice touch to the rooms.

The fight scene was great. I think James was perfect in his emotions. Poor Lily, her revelation about her parents was heartbreaking. Again I'm glad the little things are helping her though.

It cracks me up that James was getting annoyed that his friends weren't agree with him. I've been there, stating my case and I think it is perfectly reasonable but other people just can't seem to get it. HAHA! In the end I am glad they worked it out and have managed to stay friend for now. I have a feeling that this is not the end of this conversation between these two.

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more.


Author's Response: I'm so happy you said that about it being just a threat right now! You're exactly right. At this point, Voldemort is the scary name looming somewhere around. But everything that's happened has been so -in the night type- someone disappearing, someone dying, but just makes in the daily prophet. Nothing that makes it feel real. And you're right again, that will absolutely change.

I had fun creating the room! And I agree, I HATE folding laundry. Haha. And yes, I've been there too where you think so much that your point makes sense and your friends just aren't agreeing! Poor James, thought he was going to get a little more support then he did :P

Yes! They've are absolutely friends for now. And actually, though they do have their issues, I don't really have any of the 'I hate you I'm never talking to you again' kind of stuff. It's more of them trying to figure out what these feelings mean, and Lily trying to sort through all hers.

I'm so happy you liked this chapter ♥ Thank you so much for your review, m'dear!!

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