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Review:Jchrissy says:
Ohh I can't imagine how difficult it is for Hermione to be stuck in this! She's doing so well, but then those flashes of her true self come through when she sees the portrait of Bellatrix, and then again when she has to meed the delightful Rodolphus.

I love what you said about people needing to think he's dead. It wasn't that they exactly though it, as much as had to believe it to sleep better at night. It was such a perfect reminder of all the families these people had hurt. I sort of just want Hermione to go curse crazy and start Avada Kevada-ing the whole group of them :P

Your house elf was adorable! And I'm sure it's no good that Hermione got so interested in the room. Of course she would say that she's not going in to it, she wouldn't want to worry the little guy, but we all know she's too curious for her own good.

I love that you have her playing her parts so well on the outside, but still so herself on the inside. It really makes it clear how difficult of a mission this would be.

Oh! And he payed her a half compliment when he said that she's doing better than he thought she would! I am so excited for him to learn who he's really been with, mwahaha. I know I said this before, but I love so much that he doesn't know it's really Hermione.

Lovely chapter, m'dear!! ♥

Author's Response: Jami,

I hope i am staying true to Hermione even if she should be acting like someone completely.

I hate Rodolphus, he makes me skin crawl because he is such a creep. That is why I thought he would be a good addition to this story. And we will be seeing more of him in future chapters. Lol, while I like your idea of Hermione going curse crazy with this group, they deserve as much, but then what would happen to the rest of my story?? :)

I know, I'm having too much fun with this withheld information and so will Hermione!! :)

Thank you for another lovely review!!

Meg


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